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My Canvas by ~krystalraven:iconkrystalraven:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


blank page blocking me
no graffiti on it
no thoughts come to mind
the paper is my canvas
the pen my brush
my thoughts my paint
yet my canvas remains clean
and my brush empty of ink
©2008-2009 ~krystalraven
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Submitted: May 12, 2008
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eh i kinda edited a little bit while i was typing it and i'm not sure i like the outcome of it after that. i think i like the original version better. i might change it in a few days..idk...we'll see...
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*betweenthepages:iconbetweenthepages: May 12, 2008, 1:23:24 PM
why I hate anotating, its vandalizum of some ones thoughts <3
=Josie-mouse:iconJosie-mouse: May 14, 2008, 3:51:24 AM
I actually like how it turned out. You did a good job

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~krystalraven:iconkrystalraven: May 16, 2008, 5:47:54 AM
thanks

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:cd: music is...a higher revelation than all wisdom and philosophy :tunes:

:bookdiva: poetry is the rhythmical creation of beauty :butterflytwo:

:music: one definiton of poetry is any utterance that sings in short space :stereo:
=Josie-mouse:iconJosie-mouse: May 16, 2008, 10:23:04 PM
Your welcome :hug:

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Mood: Approval ~Rahvinn:iconRahvinn: Jun 16, 2008, 7:47:13 PM
Excellent work. The one weakness that poets have to overcome is knowing when to just end a poem, and this one ends abruptly and, I feel, perfectly. ^_^
~krystalraven:iconkrystalraven: Jun 17, 2008, 9:19:09 AM
hehe thanks...i think

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:cd: music is...a higher revelation than all wisdom and philosophy :tunes:

:bookdiva: poetry is the rhythmical creation of beauty :butterflytwo:

:music: one definiton of poetry is any utterance that sings in short space :stereo:
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